had a tutorial with debbie and showed her our rough draft of our film. She said that having so many bible quotes would be forcing the viewer to think what we wanted to, so we're not going to have as many of them. she also commented that there were a few dodgy shots that were shaky and not good enough to have in so we plan on taking them out. we're also going to film an opening sequence to the film as Debbie along with myself and Conor felt that it lacked a strong beginning. there are a few shots that don't connect very well so we're going to change them or take them out. Finally, we need to place the overlays of cloud montages over some of the other scenes and then this will be our film complete.
*Lose the split cut editing - As it doesnt seem to flow with the pace of the rest of it. More appropriate for a high action sequence.
* Few shakey camera shots during "Forest" sequence - replacement needed
*Obtain a possible bible quote thats relevant 1-2 max (don't over do it, rough draft had 3-4 in place) this is to create a sense of mystery - i.e. What book is she reading etc
*Unnessary credits - equipment used / programs used etc
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